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本期作者：張婷婷

2025年12月27日雅思大作文題目

Some people say that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motor bikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

題目分析：本年度最后一次紙筆考試，考題屬于議論文中同意與否類(lèi)，討論提高駕駛/騎摩托車(chē)的法定最低年齡是否是提升道路安全的最佳方式，是交通/安全類(lèi)話題，難度中等；

關(guān)鍵詞解析：

1. improve road safety 提升道路安全：道路安全的影響因素是多元的（年齡/駕駛技能/規(guī)則意識(shí)/車(chē)輛車(chē)況/道路設(shè)施等），這是反駁「最佳」的核心論據(jù)

2. increase the minimum legal age 提高法定最低年齡：核心措施，對(duì)應(yīng)的邏輯是（年齡越大，心智越成熟、判斷力越強(qiáng)、應(yīng)急反應(yīng)更理性，減少魯莽駕駛與失誤操作）

3. the best way：絕對(duì)化限定詞 the best way，這是破題核心——你可以同意「這是有效方式」，但必須反駁「最佳」這個(gè)絕對(duì)表述，單邊完全同意/完全不同意都會(huì)扣分。雅思寫(xiě)作中，所有帶the best/only/the most effective 等的絕對(duì)化題，都要反駁這個(gè)絕對(duì)詞，這是考官的評(píng)分偏好，也是邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)性的體現(xiàn)。

范文及解析

Introduction

The debate over whether increasing the minimum age for driving is the best way to improve road safety is a contentious one. While others hold a different view, personally, it is overly simplistic to suggest that it is the optimal approach.

解析

? contentious adj. 有爭(zhēng)議的，引起爭(zhēng)論的;

? optimal adj. 最佳的，最適的；

譯文參考：

關(guān)于提高最低駕駛年齡是否是改善道路安全的最佳方式，這一爭(zhēng)論頗具爭(zhēng)議。盡管有些人持不同觀點(diǎn)，但在我看來(lái)，簡(jiǎn)單地認(rèn)為這是最優(yōu)方案未免過(guò)于片面。

Body paragraph 1

Admittedly, raising the minimum driving age does come with its own tangible value in terms of reducing some road accidents caused by immature and inexperienced drivers. Younger drivers, teenagers in particular, often lack sufficient life experience and self-control. Their cognitive abilities and judgment skills are still developing, for which they may be more likely to take risks, such as speeding, driving under the influence of alcohol, or using mobile phones while driving. By deferring licensure, policymakers effectively shrink the exposure window during which these developmental vulnerabilities translate into traffic offenses and collision involvement.

解析

? tangible adj. 明確的，真實(shí)的；可觸摸的，可感知的

? cognitive adj. 認(rèn)識(shí)的，認(rèn)知的；

? defer v. 延期，推遲;

? licensure n. 許可；發(fā)給許可證；特許；

? shrink v. (使)縮小，減少；

? vulnerability n. 易損性，弱點(diǎn);

? collision n. 碰撞，相撞; 沖突，抵觸;

譯文參考：

誠(chéng)然，提高法定最低駕駛年齡在減少部分由駕駛者心智不成熟、駕駛經(jīng)驗(yàn)不足引發(fā)的道路事故方面，確實(shí)具備切實(shí)的現(xiàn)實(shí)價(jià)值。低齡駕駛者（尤以青少年群體為甚）往往缺乏足夠的生活閱歷與自我約束能力，其認(rèn)知水平與判斷力仍處于發(fā)展階段，這也致使他們更易做出超速行駛、酒駕、駕車(chē)時(shí)使用手機(jī)等危險(xiǎn)行為。通過(guò)延后申領(lǐng)駕照的法定年齡，政策制定者能夠有效縮短這一成長(zhǎng)階段的短板轉(zhuǎn)化為交通違法行為、進(jìn)而引發(fā)交通事故的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)窗口期。

Body paragraph 2

Nevertheless, even by resorting to this single measure, we are unable to uproot the underlying causes of such an intractable problem. Many accidents are not caused by inexperienced young drivers but shoddy road conditions and lenient penalties. In these cases, if traffic laws were strictly implemented – with harsher fines imposed on speeding, drink-driving and running red lights – it would serve as a strong deterrent to reckless driving behaviors. In addition, improving road infrastructure, such as the installation of more traffic lights, speed bumps, and clear road signs, can also be of paramount significance in accidents prevention.

解析

? resort to 訴諸于 ; 訴諸 ; 采?。?/p>

? intractable adj. 棘手的；難治的；

? shoddy adj. 劣質(zhì)的，粗制濫造的；

? lenient adj. 仁慈的，寬大的;

? implement v. 執(zhí)行，貫徹；為……提供工具

? deterrent n. 威懾，遏制；威懾武器

? reckless adj. 魯莽的，不計(jì)后果的;

? installation n. 安裝，設(shè)置; 裝置，設(shè)備;

? speed bump 減速帶

? paramount adj. 至為重要的，首要的; 至高無(wú)上的，權(quán)力最大的

譯文參考：

然而，僅憑這一項(xiàng)舉措，我們無(wú)法根除這一棘手問(wèn)題的根源。諸多交通事故的誘因并非缺乏經(jīng)驗(yàn)的年輕駕駛者，而是糟糕的道路路況與寬松的違規(guī)懲處。在這種情況下，若能?chē)?yán)格執(zhí)行交通法規(guī)——對(duì)超速、酒駕以及闖紅燈等行為處以更為嚴(yán)厲的罰款——便能對(duì)各類(lèi)魯莽駕駛行為形成強(qiáng)有力的震懾。此外，完善道路基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施，例如增設(shè)交通信號(hào)燈、減速帶與清晰的道路標(biāo)識(shí)，對(duì)于預(yù)防交通事故而言也具有至關(guān)重要的意義。

Body paragraph 3

Other effective ways to improve road safety should not be ignored. The driving test, to illustrate, could include more practical scenarios, such as driving in bad weather, on busy roads, or at night, to ensure that new drivers are better prepared for real traffic conditions. Furthermore, promoting public awareness about road safety through education campaigns can also make a difference. Schools, media, and communities can work together to teach people about the importance of following traffic rules, respecting pedestrians, and avoiding dangerous behaviors.

解析

? scenario n. 設(shè)想，可能發(fā)生的情況 ；

? campaign n. (有計(jì)劃的)活動(dòng)，運(yùn)動(dòng)；戰(zhàn)役，戰(zhàn)斗；

? make a difference 產(chǎn)生影響：引起變化；

? pedestrian n. 步行者，行人；

譯文參考：

其余能夠切實(shí)提升道路安全的有效舉措同樣不容忽視。例如，駕照考試可納入更多貼合實(shí)際的考核場(chǎng)景，諸如惡劣天氣、繁忙路段及夜間行車(chē)等路況的駕駛考核，以此確保新晉駕駛者能充分應(yīng)對(duì)真實(shí)的道路交通狀況。此外，借助各類(lèi)宣教活動(dòng)提升公眾的道路安全意識(shí)，同樣能發(fā)揮積極作用。學(xué)校、媒體與社區(qū)可協(xié)同發(fā)力，向民眾普及遵守交通規(guī)則、禮讓行人、杜絕危險(xiǎn)駕駛行為的重要性。

Conclusion

In conclusion, while increasing the minimum legal driving age may contribute to reducing certain types of accidents involving young and inexperienced drivers, it is far from the most comprehensive solution. Instead, a combination of stricter training and testing, better law enforcement, improved road conditions, and public education is much more likely to achieve significant and lasting improvements in road safety.

解析

? comprehensive adj. 綜合性的，全面的；

? law enforcement 執(zhí)法 ; 法律的實(shí)施 ;

譯文參考：

綜上所述，提高法定最低駕駛年齡雖能在一定程度上減少由年輕且經(jīng)驗(yàn)不足的駕駛者引發(fā)的部分交通事故，但這絕非最為全面的解決方案。相反，將更嚴(yán)格的駕駛培訓(xùn)與考核、更嚴(yán)格的執(zhí)法力度、完善的道路路況以及全民安全教育相結(jié)合，才更有可能從根本上實(shí)現(xiàn)道路安全水平的顯著且長(zhǎng)效的提升。

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